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Four hours. You were breathing so hard it felt like a mallet in the back with each exhale. You had come over to Spain's house, as you often did, to practice dancing and hang with one of your best friends, him.
  He looked over at you, and grinned. Bastard. His breathing was hard, but he obviously wasn't nearly as tired out from the exhausting dance the both of you had been working on for the last 240 minutes.  
  "Here." Spain said cheekily, offering you a water bottle. "Have a drink".You caught your breath. The light caught his hair making it shine. His cheeks were flushed, and his long, drool worthy body stretched out elegantly. You'd seen that same body dance, and shivered at the thought.
   Reminding yourself to come back down to earth, you snatched it, and drank the entire thing down in one gulp. Spain looked impressed.
   "Wow, your freaky good at swallowing things." he said. You didn't know whether to faint or face palm. Was he trying to be dirty, or were you just reading it wrong?
Checking your watch, you hissed. "Damn." you muttered,"I gotta go.", because it was already twelve at night. Spain frowned at you.
  "Amiga, it's cold and dark, and there are bad people out there. You can't walk home especially when" he added when you staggered a bit "You could collapse at any moment."
  You opened your mouth to protest, but then shrieked when he lifted you bridal style, and marched towards the door, and into the hall.
  "Put me down Spain!" You shrieked, struggling weakly. He tsked.
   "Querida" the words flowed like silk from his lips, caressing your mind. " I've told you, and told you call me by my name. But do you listen? No."
  You were silent for once, thinking this over. When you’d met him, you'd called him Spain naturally, to be formal, but he'd commanded you to call him by his name many times. You had refused. Even after becoming best friends,your pure stubbornness kept you from using his human name.
   He then reached a huge oak door, lifted his foot, then kicked it open, then nudged it shut with his foot. You could almost see him, in the moonlight, as he carried her over to a bed, his bed you realized.
   " Spa-ain" you stuttered, " I can't sleep in your bed."
   "Sure you can" he said simply. "It's the most comfortable bed I have (y-n) ."
  "Where are you going to sleep?", you asked darkly.
   " Here of course. It is my bed. And it's quite big." he smirked, and you cheeks flamed.
  He shifted you, and laid you down slowly. You were on your back, his knee wedged between your legs, and his face inches from yours.
  Leaning in, so his lips brushed your ear, he whispered "Di mi nombre Querida." You squirmed as he pressed even closer.
  "N-no" you stuttered, then squealed, as he trailed his lips down you neck. Slowly kissing you collar bone.
    "Then I'll just have to make you say it." He whispered, voice like dark velvet. Then his lips crashed into yours.  Suffice to say, Antonio made you scream out his name numerous times that night.
Your stubborn, and Spain is delectable.
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CheetahBoots Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Not joking thats hiw i reacted
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CheetahBoots Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Nit joking thats what happend when i read this
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CheetahBoots Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
"He shifted you, and laid you down slowly. You were on your back, his knee wedged between your legs, and his face inches from yours. Leaning into your ear, he wisperd, "Di minombre Querida." You squirmed as he pressed even closer."N-no." You stutterd, then squealed as he trailed his lips down your neck. Slowly kissing your collar bone. "Then I'll just have to make you say it." He whispered, voice like dark velvet. Then his lips crashed into yours. Suffice to say, Antinio made you scream out his name many times that night.

"Then I'll just have to make yo say it." His voice like dark velvet. Then his lips crashed into yours. Suffice to say, Antonio made you scream his name many times that night.

Suffice to say, Antonio made you scream his name many times that night

Antonio made you scream his name many times that night.

Antonio made you scream his name many times that night

Antonio

Made 

You

Scream

His

Name

Many

Times

That

Night

*cue my hyperventilating
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Hetalia4Elea Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't hyperventilate I had a non-stop nose bleed in front of my best friend. She read it afterwards...
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CheetahBoots Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I was hyperventilating so bad I felt like i was going to pass out. Even reading it now makes my breath catch and makes me hyperventilate
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Hetalia4Elea Featured By Owner Edited May 24, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
One of my friends has given all of us nicknames according to which country were most like, I got Denmark one got Poland and another Canada... She got Spain... 
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CheetahBoots Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
XD
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Hetalia4Elea Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Doesn't help that I act drunk all the time and that she's extremely perverted towards children...
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CheetahBoots Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Wtf...
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Hetalia4Elea Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Don't even ask
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skylasparkle Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I bet he did hehehehehe😏
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*gives peace prize* beautiful XD
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Meowhug17 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Student Filmographer
I thought that they were doing something dirty at the beginning...... Whoops. XD
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blackrosewings Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
oh...my vital regions were taken >////////<:sorry: oh you know just chil- WHATISTHAT 
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Littlecat2283 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
Oh Mai God.
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DragonStorm118 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I have no words
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OffInLalaLand64 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Oh, gawd.....Pervy Peach 
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Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
.////.

Noo..

Not my innocents...
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SilverBronze Featured By Owner Edited Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ò-ō No, jus no
jussssssssss no....



In da picture he's just there bein all like 'BITCH, MAH ARMPIT SMELL FABULOUS'
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skylasparkle Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
HAHAHAHA!!!!!! I just realized that!!! That's hilarious!!!
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kiasun Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
Why do i feel like this is ending with something that is connected to the fact that i lost my virginity, its either that or im just thinkin dirty XDDDD
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Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Probably... Not dirty thoughts no. ○_○
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kiasun Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014
THANK GOD, anyways love the story
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Adele2002 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:tomato love: 
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I like how it said we were dancing for 240 minutes. Like I'm sorry reader-chan but do you have a strict amount of dancing time do you stare at A clock while dancing XD
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animegirl38 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Di mi nombre Querida translates to "say my name my darling". I want my bonito Antonio to say that to me..:)  


  - thank you Spanish class [ fist-pumps] p.s.  bonito means pretty boy :D
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queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student General Artist
 Suffice to say, Antonio made you scream out his name numerous times that night.

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cakeElric Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed APH: Onion Spain Prussia  its Awsome Pixel Spain Icon owo Spain (Smile) [V7] Spain (Intro) [v7] 
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MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Goodbye, sweet virginity...Nosebleed The Monkey With the Nosebleed Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) 
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GumaBall Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ohohohohohohohohohohohohohon-
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asianturnip Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:nosebleed: 
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AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
Same here, tissue? *hands you a tissue 
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asianturnip Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yes please. ^^  *niagra falls into the tissue*
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DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OHMAGERD...

Nosebleed 
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Bordomgirl5 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I dunno how to respond to this, blush or laugh. XD
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iFanFics Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Why not both :iconwhynotbothplz:
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PrincessDeme0425 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Its so.....dirty! I must be reading this wrong. Nope, I'm not.

'Your freaky good at swallowing things'? Not even. I can't ...its just....wow.


ITS QUITE BIG!? I think I don't even need to say anything. And I won't.

GOOD GOING READER-CHAN! GOT IT ON THAT NIGHT!
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TomatoesAndCupcakes Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
0///¡¡\\\0
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SpongebobsMoustache Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Student Artist
IM DYING XDD Both of fangirling AMD laughing XD
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015
Your Dean profile picture is glorious.

I HAVE FOUND A FELLOW SUPERNATURAL FAN!!!
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SpongebobsMoustache Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Student Artist
And*
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treiannecalne Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student Artist
Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] Nosebleed  Oh God.. Dios Mio...Mein Gott..Mon Deiu....

APH: Onion Spain  hehehehehehehehe.. SAY IT!!!!!
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blackheart354 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconpervy2spainplz:
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Iris-the--kitty Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aye! Oh my heart has burst from the flowing passion Spain brings with his tasty voice! You have done very well, I enjoyed this very much. 
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IGame101 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OOOOOH SNAP
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SecretlyaSecret Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
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LauniSmooth Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol that one sponge Bob meme in a sea of nose bleeds...
I'm done, I just can't... AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHSHSHAGSGSGAHAHAHAHSHDINAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOL!
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MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
LOL THANKS BUT YOU HAVE TO ADMIT THAT WAS ALL OF OUR REACTIONS XD
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